Daddy’s book. Rayanna the very naughty mouse

Daddy’s book. Rayanna the very naughty mouse.

Chapter 11.

Diago entered the office, Rayanna was still stood in the corner, he cleared the office desk then got the key out of a drawer to open the cupboard. He pulled out the school strap, loopy, high impact cane and the lash, then picked the lexan too. Putting them on top of the cupboard, he pulled out the small stool and placed it in front of the office chair.

“Rayanna come here, take your shorts and panties off, fold them neatly on the chair over there then sit on this stool. Now !” He ordered. Rayanna slowly did as she was told, pulling her shorts down she folded them neatly, then slowly did the same with her panties. Before going to sit on the stool. She stretched her legs out, her body slumped as she folded her arms. “Young lady, put your legs together, knees up and hands on your knees, like you would do sitting on a chair.” Diago ordered. Rayanna threw him a filthy look but did as she was told. Defiantly, she sat and stared at him.

“I honestly don’t know what to say to you, there I am, sat with my friends when I get this phone call to tell me you’ve been shoplifting. I felt ashamed of you, embarrassed as all my mates listened to what PC Splintier told me. How could you do something like that, Pappa and Mamma have brought you up properly, you know right from wrong, did Suquie lead you on ? Did she ? Not that that’s any consolation because you know it’s wrong, it’s against the law to steal. And you know that. Nevermind stealing £200 from Pappa’s office. You’re not even allowed in here.” The lecture continued as Rayanna switched off, closed her ears to the droning as it went on and on and on, just making the appropriate noises to show she was listening, or not. The one thing she repeatedly said was she was not encouraged, told to, made to steal by Suquie. She had watched Suquie steal a lipstick so she had copied it. She wasn’t going to get Suquie into more trouble. She was her best friend and best friends do not rat on each other.

Diago could tell she was not listening, there was no remorse, no sign of feeling guilty, just defiance. “Stand up and bend over the desk. I will tell you that Pappa has told me to punish you as he would and will. And he has told me to ensure you won’t sit down for at least a week. Regardless of the bruises and state your backside is in now.” This piece of information shocked Rayanna as she stopped in her tracks. “No, you can’t do that and what you mean would and will?” She whined. “Oh I can and I am as Pappa has told me too. And the would / will…….well you don’t think Pappa is not going to punish you and I’m sure Cara will have something to say too. For now I am to punish you as if you were my daughter, now BEND OVER.” He ordered, loudly. He grabbed her ear and pushed her down over the front of the desk. “You move, I will tie you to the desk. Hold your tail.” Rayanna’s hands just reached the edge of the desk and her feet were on their tiptoes. Diago walked around to see the state of Rayanna’s bottom, it was already full of purple bruises so he went over to get some cream and rubbed some over her cheeks. Feeling her flinch at his touch.

Taking a towel out of the cupboard, he dried his hands and went over to pick up the strap and the lecturing began once more. During this time, her ass was getting a beating. Diago pounded her backside and legs, just as his father told him too. Rayanna was struggling to control herself, gripping the edge of the desk, her legs wobbled as she bit her lip to stop the tears from flowing. 

More cream was applied giving Rayanna a chance to breath and try to relax but not for long. She saw the loopy before the first strike and began to plead with Diago, please don’t use that. But her pleading fell on deaf ears, in the end she began to roll away from the strikes. 

“Right I told you what will happen if you move.” He bent down, grabbed one leg and locked her ankle to the foot of the desk with handcuffs. Rayanna had no idea where the cuffs came from, he hadn’t had them in his hand but there he was on the other leg, she could not move her legs at all, Only the tip of her big toe actually touched the floor, then he grabbed a wrist and that was quickly locked to an iron ring at the front of the desk. Repeating the same to her other arm. There was no possibility of her moving anywhere.

“Now 1 thing I cannot believe with this whole situation about you shoplifting is, this was your first try at it, or so you say, now I imagine if you were trying it for the first time, you’d be nervous, so for example, if it was me, I’d be shitting myself so may steal 1 or 2 things but you, you steal 26 items. Were you feeling so cocky you couldn’t be caught or have you stolen in the past ?” Diago asked as he continued to lecture her. “I’m waiting for an answer Rayanna!” He coldly said before whipping her with the loopy. Rayanna screeched out in pain, trying to answer between crying and coughing. He went to the mini fridge and grabbed a bottle of water, lifting it to her mouth carefully, she gulped it down. “Slowly, Ray, don’t choke.” He wiped her hair away from her face and sat down so they could look at each other face to face. “So…….” He waited patiently. “W….w…..when me an Suq was about 9 we took some sweets from the sweet shop but it was no more than 3 times and we only took 1 sweet. I never even thought about it again coz I felt so guilty bout it, Today Suq told me she has been stealing stuff for a few years, I was gobsmacked D, I mean I’m with her all the time but she’s never told me, I’ve never seen her do it before today. She’s had new stuff but she gets pocket money like I do plus earns extra doing jobs so I just presumed she’d paid for it. I didn’t realise I’d took so much, we just went from shop to shop, I put the odd thing in, I honestly had no idea it was so much an I’ve no idea how she stole some clothes. Most stuff has alarms on ‘em.” Diago studied her sister’s face whilst she spoke to him and he thought, felt she was telling him the truth.

“Okay well 26 items is a hell of a lot. I may not be so mad with you if it had been 2 or 3 and I’m sure Pappa will say the same thing. You know I’ve had to tell him, you know you will be punished by him but more importantly you will have to gain his trust again. There’s no question that me, Cara, who by the way doesn’t know what has happened yet, but me, Cara, Mamma and Pappa, we are going to be watching you like a hawk. You’ve lied to me, Cara and you’ve disappointed us and Pops and Mamma. You will not be left alone again for a long, long time. So 26 items, this will equal 26 swats with loopy, the high impact cane then the lexan. I want you to count, 1 It is wrong to steal, I will never steal again. Do you understand ?” Diago’s voice seemed to boom at her yet she knew he wasn’t shouting. All Rayanna heard was 26 with those evil implements. “Yes Sir,” she replied, her voice tiny.

When Diago began, Rayanna tried her hardest not to cry out, the pain was the worst she had ever felt, her bottom was already covered in purple bruises before this new punishment began, she had to dig deep inside herself to deal with it. But by the time he was half way with the loopy, her tears fell freely, betraying her determination not to cry. She had made a few mistakes with counting the strokes but luckily Diago let her off, usually her father would give you an extra stroke for getting it wrong. She certainly didn’t believe it was because he was slightly softer than Pappa. 

And she was not wrong, when he changed to the cane, he said, “You had better count properly this time because you will get an extra stroke for each wrong number.” 

The first stroke took her breath away, straight across her sit spot, catching her happy spot too. Quickly she counted, saying the correct thing, as the cane repeated its severe assault off the same area. Rayanna began to scream, sob and shake but she did well getting through the 26 with only 1 wrong count. There were now deep welts over her cheeks, welts over her legs, many of them bleeding now. Diago wasn’t surprised she began to bleed so quickly after the amount of punishments she had had over the last 2 months. He hoped Cara would not want to physically punish her too tomorrow, but that was up to her.

Diago gave Rayanna some water, wiped her face giving her time to calm down again. “It’s nearly over Ray, you’re being a good girl and taking your punishment well. Continue this please.” He told her gently. Unfortunately, this only made her mad, her defiance began to stew inside her, feeling that Diago was treating her like a little girl. This defiance came out in her voice as she counted the strokes with that evil lexan paddle. And Diago heard it immediately. The lexan came down harder, still her voice sounded more defiant, she hadn’t screamed, cried out, and not a single tear was shed. Christ she is one tough kid, he thought to himself. He swatted her across one leg, the edge of the paddle hit her happy spot, this made Rayanna whimper, so he hit her on the alternate side, repeated this for 10 strokes, still her defiance hadn’t dissipated. Her hands fisted, he could see her gritting her teeth, a look of determination shocked him, after all this spanking she was still fighting it. There was not 1 wrong count during this set of 26 as she lay across Pappa’s desk, “Can you untie me now?” She said, the brazenness in her voice, her expression shocked him but made him mad.

He hoped he wouldn’t need to get the lash but now, seeing her insolence, he was going to. He grabbed some scissors out of a drawer in the desk, went round and cut her shirt away. Rayanna screeched at her brother, cursing and yelling, “If you’re going to pretend to be a tough girl, acting like an adult, you can have a whipping like an adult would, like Mamma would, maybe then you will realise you are still a little girl Rayanna. Take that insolent look of your face right now and if you curse at me once more you will get a soaping too.” 

Diago walked to the cupboard and picked out the lash, he’d used it a couple of times with an ex-girlfriend but he wasn’t experienced in it. Either way, he would use it and show her what happens when she continues to be so defiant. He started off by lecturing her once more, his stern  voice seemed to be getting through to her, that and the fear of his lash thing Diago talked about. 

Holding the end of the lash, Diago whipped it across her back, Rayanna screamed, it’s tongue tore at her sides, catching her breasts. The sharpness shocked Rayanna, making her gasp for air, her fingers stretched out wide as she clenched her body. Diago continued to whip her, 10 on the left side, 10 on the right side. The edge of the lash caused welts, some cut her skin, breaking it and making her bleed. But he was relentless until he saw the defiance dissolve, her body gave way to the onslaught, slumping over the desk, Ray’s tears began to fall and she sobbed, harsh, deep, guttural sounds came from her throat. Diago stopped immediately, and unlocked all the cuffs but Rayanna stayed over the desk, all anger had subsided and she just lay, collapsed, unable to move.

Carefully Diago lifted her into his arms and carried her to her bedroom. She clung to him, crying into his shirt. He could feel it was already wet from her tears, slobber and probably snot. Normally he would be grossed out by this but now, he wasn’t bothered. He gently lay her on the bed, “I’m just going to get a bowl of water to clean you up. Okay ?” he quietly said, Rayanna nodded. Quickly he was back, warm water and a sponge were put on the floor, along with a towel, a tub of cream and a box of plasters. Very carefully he washed her bottom, legs and back, gently patting her dry, there were some cuts that required plasters, then he rubbed some cream in as gently as he could.

“You will need a few days rest Ray, so I do not want you to leave the room unless you need the bathroom. Cara and I will look after you until Mamma’s home, we will bring you your meals. But you will have work to do whilst you are resting.  I want 1000 lines written, I will bring you your notebook and pencil and I will write the sentence down I want you to write. But I want these written whilst you are in bed. No tv at all but you may listen to the radio or put your own music on. I will make you something to eat now, then I want you to go to sleep.” He kissed Rayanna’s head then left the room. Rayanna burst into tears again, this had truly been the worst punishment she had ever received. She was dreading seeing Cara tomorrow and the thought of seeing her Mamma and Pappa made her feel sick. Her thoughts went on to Suquie, how was she ? has she been punished as hard as she had ? She just wanted to see her or speak to her. 

After a few minutes Diago returned with a tray of food. He’d made her cheese and ham sandwiches, a tangerine already peeled for her, a banana, a cereal bar and a big glass of milk. He had also put on the tray a cheese and nut snack box that Rayanna liked. It had cubes of cheese on one side then the other side had barbecued flavour peanuts. Taking a stool from the kitchen, he put it next to her bed and placed the tray on top of it. Rayanna wouldn’t need to move much to reach her meal. “I expect all this to be eaten, Rayanna before you go to sleep. You may read your book, here’s your kindle. He left the room for a moment before returning with a new notebook and pencil. He sat at her dressing table and wrote the sentence he wanted her to write. 

‘I will not steal, I know it is wrong and more importantly I know it is illegal. I have disappointed Mamma and Pappa, Cara and Diago  and I am very sorry.’

“1000 lines writing this sentence whilst you are on bedrest. Neatest handwriting please. Eat your dinner then go to sleep. I will be back to check on you later.” Diago told her before leaving the room, keeping the door slightly ajar.                                                                                                                                                                                           

Daddy’s book, Rayanna the very naughty mouse

Chapter 8. Rayanna, the naughty little mouse.

The following few days were hard for both Rayanna and Honey, Pappa had continued daily spankings for Rayanna and Honeys bruises were now black, covering everywhere, including her back. It had taken a lot of will power to just get out of bed the next day but Honey dragged herself and her little girl out of bed to start her school work. She wanted to allow her to sit on a cushion but she didn’t dare, incase Sebastian came home early. Plus there was no way she would defy him again. All she could do was ensure Rayanna put cream on, morning, noon and night, which did help her a bit. But also make sure she did all her work as she herself did all her chores. Not wanting any excuse for her husband to be mad with her.

Rayanna was trying hard to be very very good, she got her school work, sat awkwardly on the stool, the pain ran up and down her body, tears sprang from her eyes, but all she could do was breath deeply and focus on her work instead. Honey was busy with her chores, popping in and out of the kitchen, checking on her youngster, if she needed anything or any help.

As each day passed, they were slowly feeling the bruises fade, ten days later, Honey’s bottom now only showed yellowing faded bruises, her back was now clear of any marks. Rayanna’s bruises were practically gone even though she was still getting her spanking every day, now it wasn’t quite as painful as before. And it was nice that the atmosphere was now pleasant again, Pappa was not checking over every tiny thing anymore so it just felt more relaxed. For Honey though, she felt things were still tense, Sebastian was his usual caring self, but she felt things were not over. Maybe she was just mistaken, she certainly hoped so. 

Wednesday evening, the family were sitting down for dinner, Sebastian hadn’t been home long, he had just got changed from his suit to something more relaxing but he was looking very tired at the head of the table. Everyone chatted away as they passed dishes of food all around, the noise was loud, bustling kids grabbing the food they wanted, soon though everyone went quieter as they began munching on their dinner. Towards the end of their meal, Pappa said, “Now I have some news, your Mamma and I are going away for the weekend, we will go first thing in the morning, Cara will be in charge of everything. Do you hear me ?” He looked directly at Rayanna, she realised he meant Cara would be in charge of her spankings, and that thought horrified her. She opened her mouth to protest, “This is not up for discussion, Cara is the oldest, so she will be in charge. No one had better disappoint me.” He glared at Rayanna, sensing her shock and change of attitude with her. She shook her head, ready to throw a tantrum, there was no way she was going to let Cara spank her. “Pappa I will not let Cara punish me, no way, it’s not happening. She’s my sister not my parent.” Rayanna shouted. “She’s no right! ”  Cara shook her head, Rayanna still has a lot to learn, she thought, looking at Pappa, who nodded his head, she stood up, walked to a kitchen drawer, took out a thick wooden spoon, sat down again, waiting for the next nod from Pappa. Rayanna was still kicking off, as she shouted at Pappa and Mamma. Pappa nodded at Cara once more, then she stood up, grabbed Rayanna’s arm, pulling her towards her own chair, she sat down, throwing Rayanna over her knee, grabbed the wooden spoon and walloped her bottom. With all the struggle, Rayanna’s skirt was already up over her bottom, so Cara was able to aim for her sit spots whilst Rayanna kicked and punched into the air. The other siblings watched quietly as they ate, thankful it wasn’t them. Ten agonizing swats later, Rayanna was crying, embarrassed and very humiliated. 

“So Rayanna, now you know your sister can spank very hard, I suggest you do as you are told. Go stand in the corner, skirt up until I tell you.” Pappa told her as she glared at her parents and at Cara. “Put that back in the drawer please.” Cara asked sweetly, holding the spoon, Rayanna threw her a filthy look, snatching the spoon she threw it back in the drawer and stomped to the corner, her face flushed and tear stained, she was fuming with them. The other siblings just sat quietly, knowing not to get involved.

“As I said, Mamna and I are away from tomorrow morning so I want you all to do your chores and do as Cara tells you. I don’t want to hear about any bad behaviour from any of you. We will be back late Sunday evening, we won’t need a meal Cara, we will have something there.” Pappa told her. Cara nodded her head, “That’s fine Pappa, everything will be fine here, so you go and enjoy your weekend.” “Where are you going Pappa ?” Colin said, the middle son. “That’s a surprise Colin, I don’t want to spoil it for your Mamma.” Pappa said. Colin nodded his head, understanding what Pappa was saying. 

Honey was surprised by this announcement, smiling to her husband, she said, “What do I need to pack ?” She asked. “Don’t worry about that, I will do it. I want you to sleep well tonight, so have an early night please.” He said,  gathering the dinner plates as Honey stood up and took the plates away, bringing the dessert for everyone. The chatter restarted as Rayanna still stood in the corner, still fuming. This can’t be happening, she had no intention of letting Cara spank her, NO WAY.

When the children went off after dinner, to do their own thing, Sebastian helped Honey clear the table. She was giddy with excitement about the weekend away. “Where are we going ? What do I need to pack ? Why didn’t you say anything ? Thank you for such a lovely surprise.” She said over and over though Sebastian didn’t give her any clues. She was told that he had already packed his and her bags, she didn’t need much anyway. “I’m very annoyed with Rayanna’s behaviour again, I don’t know what’s going on with her. It’s like she’s turned into a rebellious teenager overnight, we need to clamp down on her.” He told Honey. “I think that’s exactly it Seb, she is a teenager, her hormones, her body is changing, it’s a hard time for any mouse. Should we not ease up on her ?” She asked him. “Absolutely not, she will run amok and become a delinquent. She’s already a spoilt brat. I will deal with her shortly. Give yourself an early night tonight please, we need to be up by 6am.” Sebastian told her kissing her cheek. 

Honey finished cleaning the kitchen, as she walked to the hall she spotted 2 small bags of luggage, she was just about to open them when Sebastian walked through. Taking the bags he said he was just about to put them in the car. “But I don’t know if you’ve packed everything.” she stated. “I have, I promise. If you’re all done, why not run a nice hot bath, bed by 8pm please.” Sebastian ordered. “Bu……..b……but, yes Sir.” She told him, knowing she would be in trouble if she argued. So she headed upstairs to run the bath.

Sebastian put the bags in the boot of the car, closing it again, he lent on it thinking about Rayanna. He couldn’t believe that outburst again, what should he do with her. If she was a few years older, he would take her to the Snuggery. But she has to be 16 to go. And if this continues, that is exactly where she was going, for her 16th birthday.

He headed back to the house, going to his office. There he picked up a very heavy wooden bath brush, this was feared by everyone in the house plus a thick cane then he walked up the stairs and stopped outside Rayanna’s room. Her music was blaring so she didn’t hear him walk in. He found her on Colin’s laptop, skyping with Suquie. “WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU ARE DOING RAYANNA ?” He yelled, making her jump, turning around and closing the laptop, at the same time. “Whose laptop is this ?” He asked, furious with her. “Colin’s…” Rayanna muttered. “Does he know ?” Pappa asked her, Rayanna shook her head. “Colin, come here a minute.” He called to his son, Colin quickly appeared at the bottom of the stairs, “Yes Pappa, what’s up ?” He asked as he climbed up the stairs. “Did you know Rayanna took your laptop ?” Pappa asked. “No, no I didn’t, what the hell Rayanna, have you been in my room again?” he yelled. Rayanna defiantly shrugged her shoulders, refusing to answer, just throwing him an evil look. “Pappa I want a lock on my door, will you help me put it on. I’m fed up of her going through my stuff.” Colin asked, furious with his sister. “Yes son, I will. Here you go, I suggest you change the password.” Pappa told him. “I will Pappa, I‘ll do it now.” Colin took the laptop, glaring at Rayanna who had the audacity of putting her middle finger up at him quickly. But not quick enough that her father didn’t miss what she did.  

“Undress and get in the corner.” Pappa ordered, placing the brush and cane on the bed, then he walked out. He went back to his office, opened a drawer and picked out an unopened bag. Taking it back upstairs, he entered her bedroom, grabbed her earlobe and dragged her into the bathroom. “You think you are being smart don’t you Rayanna, taking things that don’t belong to you, using your middle finger to your brother. Well this will stop right now. Stand facing the wall.” Pappa shouted at her whilst he opened the bag. Inside were the contents of a douche, so he got everything ready, filled 3 jugs with warm soapy water, got the nozzle and tubes connected, finally putting some lube on the side. “So young lady, I think we need some serious attitude adjustments. I do not like the change in you, lie on the floor, on your back, knees up to your chest. NOW.” Pappa ordered, he had a no-nonsense tone to his voice.

Rayanna felt totally humiliated being naked in front of her father and lying on the floor like she was told, her most private areas on show. She could feel herself blush bright red.
“See if you think you’re all grown up and can do what you want, you think it’s okay disrespecting me, your mother, teachers at school, then it’s time to give you a more grown up punishment. Or part 1 of it. Your mother has this punishment. It’s called a douching, I’m going to insert this nozzle into your bottom hole, right inside.” Rayannas eyes grew wide, “ Then see there are jugs of soapy water there, I’m going to fill your naughty bottom with this water using this bag and these tubes. You will then hold this water inside your naughty bottom, until I tell you, you can release it. And do not think this will be easy because I promise you, it won’t.” Rayanna just glared at him, her nostrils flared as she angrily fumed at what he said. Suddenly something cold dripped over her bottom hole, making her jump. Then a finger went inside her, it felt painful, very humiliating and uncomfortable. The finger came out then the hard nozzle was pushed inside her, as he pushed it past the tight ring of muscle, “Hold it there Rayanna. Do not push it out until I tell you. Understand ?” He asked, Rayanna refused to answer, so he slapped her very hard across her leg, “I said understand ?” Rayanna cried out, rubbing her leg, “Yes Pappa.” She replied, her voice quiet. Soon she felt pressure build up inside, she felt the warm water entering her, almost flowing through her tubes inside until it reached her bowel. She began whimpering as the second jug was poured inside, that’s when the pain really did take hold. Sebastian decided to leave the third jug, there was a lot of fluid already inside her, he didn’t want to damage her insides. “I’m going to slowly pull the nozzle out, it will be uncomfortable again, but focus. You do not release and empty your bowel until the alarm goes off, if I feel it necessary, I will repeat the process again. Once you’ve emptied it all out, then I will spank your naughty sore butt.” he picked up the timer that was on the shelf, putting it on for half an hour. “Stay on the floor until the alarm goes off, then you may release everything in the toilet. If I’ve not come back after the timer ends and you’ve finished emptying out, you can go and stand in the corner.”

Carefully and slowly he pulled the nozzle out, making her gasp and roll to her side, holding her tummy. Sebastian put everything in a bag to clean later on and left the bathroom. Why was he having so much trouble with his wife and youngest at the moment, he just didn’t understand. Walking past his bedroom, he heard Honey in the bath, she will be primping herself for the ‘weekend away’. If only she knew. 

After half an hour he knew Rayanna would be squirming on the floor, but he didn’t go up to check. Not just yet, he wanted to see exactly if his daughter followed his instruction.

For Rayanna, this had been the hardest half an hour of her life. The pain in her tummy was so awful, she couldn’t stop herself crying, rolling around the floor, hugging her legs to her tummy in foetal position, desperate to empty her bowels. Squeezing her bottom cheeks tightly together to stop anything leaking out. But she successfully kept in this position until her Pappa returned. 

“You may release it now, once finished, I want you to take a shower.” he said as she struggled to get up and crawled to the toilet, standing up, she quickly sat down and released. Oh the pain made her double up over the toilet but she stayed there until she felt finally empty.

Yet the pain was still there, grateful that she was empty but her body still convulsed. When it eased again, she turned the shower to very hot, climbed in and let the water run down her back. Unaware that her Pappa had walked in. “Pappa, I emptied out, like you told me.” 

“Good girl. Now I want you to bend over, hold the taps and do not move.” He turned the shower off as Rayanna tried to cover herself up. “Position,” he shouted as he reached for the bath brush. Looking at it, Rayanna wondered what the point of that was, it didn’t look like much, but she soon understood that it was a very painful implement. She gripped the taps tightly as her Pappa paddled her backside again. Pappa lectured her about behaving and stop doing things that break his rules. Her attitude was disgraceful, he didn’t appreciate the change in her and if this continued she would be spanked every day. Rayanna bawled like a baby, after having the douche thing, her bottom hole was very very sore so when Pappa paddled over the crack of her bottom it bruised her hole even more. She screeched when the bathbrush hit her legs, there didn’t seem to be any part of her bottom or legs left untouched. “Spread your legs and your bottom cheeks,” Pappa ordered. “W….w…….WHAT ?” Rayanna shouted. “You heard me, spread now.” Her Pappa was getting annoyed with her attitude again. But somehow, she spread her legs, arms moved back to reach her buttocks then spread them. “I’m going to give you 10 more, I want you to count, 1 I will be a good girl, 2 I will be a good girl. 1 extra swat if you miscount.” Pappa told her.
He patted the brush over her bottom hole and happy spot, then he began. He hit her solidly and central, so hard Rayanna struggled to get the words out, but eventually she said her line, over and over. She could feel her happy spot swell up, and deep bruises between her legs where the edge of the brush caught her inner thigh. Her legs began to shake, feeling like she couldn’t cope. She let go, stood up and begged her Pappa to stop. Then she did the stupidest thing she could have done. She grabbed the bath brush and threw it across the room, then tried to climb out of the bath.

“How dare you Rayanna.” Pappa bawled at her. But Rayanna was furious with him, “Please Pappa stop now.” As her Pappa stopped her climbing out of the bath, she stood, arms crossed looking even more defiant, “How dare you, you are a wanton young lady, you will not become unmanageable, this is not just naughty behaviour this is obstreperous and I will not accept this, put your hands out in front of you.” She glared at him, but did as she was told as he picked up the bath brush. “If you ever grab an implement I am using again, I will punish your hands as well.”

With that, he brought the brush down with a loud crack, as it hit her palms, Rayanna let out a cry, but refused to let tears fall. 10 excruciating swats later on her hands, then it was over. Well for her hands anyway. “Turn, bend and spread, do the 10 again.” Pqppa told her, turning around, the fight seemed to have left her as she did as she was told. Taking the 10 strong swats over her happy spot and bottom hole, she didn’t utter one cry, let one tear fall, she just stood there until they were over. It was then he chose to leave the cane.

Pappa helped her out of the bath, covering her with a towel, he hugged her tightly. “I want my good little girl back Rayanna, please do not get in any bother again. Now dry yourself off, get ready for bed, I will rub cream in then you can go to sleep.” Pappa told her, noticing this coldness over her, she looked angry, stubborn, he imagined she was thinking all sorts in her head. He reached down and gave her a kiss then she walked away.

Ten minutes later he came into her room, she lay on her tummy, reading. He gently rubbed cream in, Rayanna muttered sorry to him, but it didn’t feel like she meant it but he left it alone for now, kissed her, gave her a big hug, getting a halfhearted hug back from her, then told her to read for half an hour then straight to sleep. She nodded but didn’t speak, she was really angry, she didn’t feel upset, she felt defiant. She wanted to do what she wanted to do and her Pappa and Mamma were not going to stop her.

Daddy’s book, Rayanna the very naught mouse

Daddy’s book

Rayanna, the very naughty mouse. Chapter 4. Word count 3140

Rayanna’s Mamma was very kind to her when they got home, she ushered her straight to her dorm, ignoring her Pappa asking what had happened. Laying on her tummy, on the cot, her Mamma lifted her skirt and tail, slipped her panties off and went to get her a wet washcloth. Gently she cleaned the stripes across her thighs, sitspot and flanks, they looked nasty as deep purple welts began showing up, becoming more swollen. Carefully her Mamma rubbed cream in, Rayanna cried quietly into her pillow until finally she finished. Her Mamma crouched on the floor next to her daughter’s face and wiped her tears away. “I’m s….s….sorry Mamma. Really I am, I was just so angry with that girl, I’m so scared Suquie will hurt herself badly.” Rayanna spluttered. Her Mamma kissed her head gently, “Sweetheart this is a secret we cannot keep, Suquie’s parents need to know. This is too serious not to tell them….” Rayanna began protesting but her Mamma put a finger to her lips, “Ray, imagine if Suquie did something to herself, and her Mamma walking in and finding her, that’s a terrible thing for her to see. Imagine the guilt she would feel, and your guilt. We need to go to speak with her parents, let Miss Finch sort out the school bullying, we need to be there for Suquie and her family.” Mamma told her. “What if she moves school Mamma, could I leave with her ?” Rayanna asked. “We will discuss it, if it comes to that, okay. Now you need to sleep a while, you’re bottom is going to be very sore for quite some time. You also have your Pappa to face. Now sleep.” her Mamma stood up, gently lay a blanket over her then left the room.

Her Pappa was pacing back and forth in the kitchen waiting to hear what happened. Her Mamma told him to sit down, making them both a drink, she told him everything. His face went from furious to concern, back to anger again. He wanted to go and speak with his daughter now, but her Mamma stopped him. Telling him she needed rest, for once he agreed, shaking his head. “You know we should be proud of Ray for looking out for Suquie, but cursing at Miss Finch what has happened to our baby girl ?” he said. “She’s growing up  that’s what’s going on. Trying to act like the bigger kids. But I’m more worried about Suquie. I think we need to speak to her parents tomorrow. I want to phone them, ask them to come round.” Pappa nodded, so Mamma went to the phone and called Suquies parents. They arranged to come around at 10am the next day.

Rayanna slept and wept through the night, her Mamma brought her dinner, making sure she was okay, telling her Suquie and her parents were coming around tomorrow. Rayanna was really worried Suquie would be mad with her, breaking her promise not to tell anyone, but her Mamma assued her she would be okay.

The next morning Rayanna tried to sit up, crying out in pain just as her Pappa walked past her door. He knocked then opened the door, “You okay, Ray ? You hurting ?” He asked as he came to her, holding his hands out, Rayanna got up and hugged her Pappa. Whispering, “I’m sorry Pappa, I never meant to speak that way to Miss Finch, I can’t believe I swore at her.” Pappa laughed a little, “Girl you did more than just swear a little, you always do things over the top don’t you. Now you know I will punish you for this, you’re in serious trouble but this morning I want to focus on Suquie, you must tell the whole truth when they come around, no secrets, do you hear me ?” He told her, “Yes Pappa.” Rayanna whispered, “Good girl, now I will get your Mamma to check your bottom and bring you breakfast. We will talk later about this issue though.” She nodded as he left, wincing as she sat down.

Her Mamma brought her some breakfast, checking Rayanna’s bottom, she left it bare, saying let the air get to it for a while. “Eat your breakfast then get a shower, I will check it again, I think I will need to put some plasters over certain areas, then you can get dressed.” She told Rayanna, then left to get a tray ready with cups and tea and coffee pots.

Rayanna ate her breakfast greedily, she didn’t realise how hungry she was, sitting down was very hard, pain shot up her body, tears sprang to her eyes as she blinked them away. She was really nervous, hoping Suquie didn’t go mad with her for telling her secret. After breakfast she quickly had a shower, jumping and squeaking when water ran over her sore bottom. After her shower she lay flat on her tummy on her bed, letting the air dry her naturally, listening to music and messing on her IPad. Her Mamma had been in, to rub cream over her bum, so she just stayed naked for a while. The fresh air on her bottom actually felt really nice so she was happy staying as she was until she had to get dressed.

As her music was on so loud, she never heard the doorbell, never heard her Mamma shouting her, never heard Suquie open her door until she heard a gasp, and felt a paw on her leg. Rayanna jumped, taking her headphones off, seeing Suquie gaping at her backside. “Suquie, what the…..” Rayanna began to say.

“What…….what happened Ray, how……what did that to you ? Who……. Ray I’m so sorry. I never wanted to get you in trouble. Tell me what happened.” Suquie said, her voice quivered. Rayanna spent the next few minutes explaining what happened when her mum arrived at school. Suquie was shocked but also giggled at the thought of Rayanna swearing at Miss Finch, imagining how horrified she would be. But when Rayanna began telling her about the mouth soaping and the caning, Suquie was horrified. “Can I touch it ?” she asked. Rayanna nodded, she had no issues being naked in front of her best friend, they had both examined each other’s bodies.

Carefully Suquie ran a finger lightly over her welted skin, feeling its heat, feeling her best friend flinch at her touch. Rayanna explained how it felt during the caning, going into great detail. “Ray, I’m so sorry. I never meant you getting into trouble. I’m really sorry, and that bitch hasn’t got into trouble again. I can’t believe she’s not got suspended or expelled.” Suquie said, giving her best friend a hug. “I think Finch is gonna do some investigating now, she claimed she didn’t know about half the stuff that had happened. Sus, I told them about you cutting yourself, I’m so sorry, I was just so mad I blurted it out to Finch, about you talking about hurting yourself.” Rayanna told her, looking back at Suquie who was still examining her backside. She looked at Ray, “I know Ray, Finch phoned Mamma to go in and see her next week but your Mamma told mine when she phoned last night. They talked for a long time, but Mamma and Pappa didn’t say anything to me until this morning. They kept telling me not to be upset with you, that you were only doing what good friends do, looking out for me. I was angry at first Ray, but I know you’ve been worried sick about me, I know that. I’m sorry I’ve put you in an awkward position and getting you in trouble with Finch.” Suquie hugged her best friend before Rayanna pulled away, telling her she better get dressed before her parents come to get them. The girls chatted whilst Rayanna got some clothes on, wincing as her panties touched her bottom. Then they went into the living room, both sets of parents were sat there, cups of tea and coffee were on the table, cans of unopened Cola were out for the girls, as the parents stopped talking whilst the girls grabbed a can each and sat together on the settee. “Rayanna, I want to start by saying thank you for being such a good friend to Suquie. Protecting her against those bullies. We know how long this has been going on, though Miss Finch claims she didn’t know half of it. By the end of next week, she will know everything and we will be putting our foot down to get this stopped. Hopefully getting the girls expelled.” Suquie’s Pappa said. “Please don’t send me to another school Pappa, you know there are bullies in every school, I can’t leave Rayanna with them.” Suquie begged, the girls held hands on the settee, though Rayanna sat awkwardly. 

The parents and girls talked about everything that had been happening at school. Suquie’s Pappa wrote everything down, trying to remember dates when certain things happened. Luckily Suquie had written a lot down in her diary, names, dates, even times of each incident and what happened so her Pappa took that to look through.

“I know Rayanna is in a lot of trouble at school but I hope you can understand her actions. I know it’s nothing to do with us, how you discipline your children is your own business, but I wondered if you could think about the reason why this happened. If you….” Suquie’s Mamma said. “I understand what you are saying and I will consider why she did what she did, and the punishment will be what it is. It’s what happened between her and Miss Finch that I cannot ignore. Cursing, disrespecting Miss Finch I will not ignore. But I will consider what you said. Girls you may leave us now if you want. “ Rayanna’s Pappa said, his voice serious and very stern. “Thank you Pappa.” Rayanna said, she and Suquie ran back to her dorm. She could hear her Pappa telling Suquie’s parents what happened in the office.

Rayanna quickly closed the door, not wanting to hear them talking. She gasped when the door handle caught her bruised palms, making Suquie jump. “What’s wrong ?” She asked, going to look at her paws. Running her fingers over the welts that were showing, purple bruises were starting to show. “Did Finch do this ? With that cane ? Fucking hell Ray, that looks real sore.” Suquie said softly. Blowing gently on both palms to cool them down, she looked at her best friend and gave her a big hug. “Can I do anything to make it better ?” she asked. Rayanna sniffed a little, “Would you rub cream on my bum ?” she asked. “Course I will, this one ?” Rayanna nodded, she took her panties off and lay down on the cot. “Sitting down hurts so much Su, I know Pappa knew it would hurt when I had to sit down, least it wasn’t on the floor.” Suquie began rubbing cream in, very slowly, feeling and looking at every bruise, welt and mark. “ It’s so hot Ray, would you prefer a wet cold washcloth placing over your arse instead  ?” Her best friend asked. “ Oh that’s a great idea Su, do you mind ?” Rayanna asked. “ Of course not.” Suquie jumped up, went to the bathroom, found a washcloth and ran it under the cold tap for a long time. Squeezing the water out, she was left with a icy cold cloth which she took and carefully placed it over Rayanna’s bottom. Ray gasped when the cold cloth touched her burning skin, but after a second, it made it feel better. “Oh that’s nice Su. “ 

Rayanna turned her head to Suquie, “Can I tell you a secret, and I mean this does have to be between us ?”  She asked her friend. “ Yes of course Ray, you know that. “ Suquie told her. “Well you know like when I was being caned, I started to feel this like tingle, you know, down there. It was weird coz it hurt like hell yet it felt exciting too.” Rayanna said. “Do you mean down there, down there ?” Suquie asked. “Yeah, right there.” Rayanna pointed down towards her groin. The girls fell about laughing, they were growing up, their bodies changing,  turning them into grownup mice. They talked about boys and sex a lot, and they had looked closely at each others bodies, their developing breasts, even their pubic hair was examined. Both girls had chatted about playing with each other, just to see how it feels but they hadn’t done anything yet. They were waiting for a sleepover, then they intended to explore. But for now they chatted for a while about how Rayanna felt during her punishment.
Soon Suquie’s parents called for her, it was time for her to leave. Rayanna asked if she could stay for a bit longer but her Pappa said no. The girls hugged each other, saying bye as the parents gave each other a little kiss, hug and shook hands, then they all left.  As Rayanna started to walk towards her dorm, her Pappa told her to go and wait in her parents bedroom. She knew immediately that this will be when her Pappa speaks to her and probably punishes her about what happened. Her Mamma scurried away to tidy up then said she was going to the shops.

Her head hung low, Rayanna pouted then headed to her parents bedroom. She sat on the bed and waited. Now she felt very very nervous, knowing her Pappa was really cross with her. Her Pappa popped his head in the room, “ Go and stand by the wall Rayanna, paws on your head, here is a coin, I want you to hold that coin to the wall with your nose. You will stay there for 30 minutes, if you drop it, the time starts again.” He ordered, the strictness in his voice made Rayanna’s blood run cold. She took the coin, headed to a wall, her eyes filled with tears, then after a few go’s, she was set for standing there for a long long time. “ I want you to be very honest Rayanna, if you drop the coin you will reset the time back to 30 minutes. DO NOT LIE. Do you hear me ?” He ordered, “ Yes Pappa.” Then he walked out of the room.

A few minutes later, Rayanna began fidgeting, and she dropped the coin. Feeling sure her Pappa didn’t hear it drop to the floor, she picked it up and didn’t reset the timer. It was so boring spending 30 minutes facing the wall, Rayanna sung quietly to herself, her feet moving about, she ended up dropping the coin 4 more times, but she thought she was being clever by catching it with her body so it didn’t drop to the floor, incase her Pappa was nearby and heard the little clatter the coin would make when it hit the floor. Again she didn’t change the timer, how would her Pappa know ? He wasn’t in the room, so he won’t know. 

Finally the timer rang out loud, her Pappa entered the room again seeing his daughter facing the wall, he turned the timer off. “Come here Ray.” He ordered, his voice sounded loud and hard. Rayanna moved away, catching the coin and headed to where her Pappa indicated, “Did you manage to do the time out without dropping the coin ?” He asked. “Yes Pappa,” Rayanna said, looking at the floor. “Did you Rayanna ? I would be surprised if you didn’t stumble and drop it, even Mamma does at least once.” Pappa told her. “Did you drop it, tell me the truth.” Rayanna wasn’t prepared to tell her Pappa she dropped it loads, “No Pappa, I held it all the time.” She told him. “Rayanna we have always taught you to be honest, you know lying is wrong.” She started to say something but her Pappa held a finger up to stop her. “As I said you know lying is wrong, yet you lie to me now, right in front of me, are you not in enough trouble ? I saw you drop it 5 times. 5 Rayanna. Isn’t that correct ? Look at me now.” He ordered. Rayanna slowly lifted her head, and looked at her Pappa, he was furious, she had never seen his eyes look so angry. She began twiddling her fingers about and whispered, “Yes Pappa.”
He took a deep breath, shaking his head, what had happened to his little girl, suddenly she has changed so much, not doing as she’s told, cursing, fighting and now lying. This had to stop.

Her Pappa sat on the bed, “Come here.” He ordered. Rayanna slowly headed towards her Pappa, she suddenly felt very very nervous. “I’m very disappointed in you Rayanna, you know better than to lie. Look at me.” He ordered again. “You are grounded for 2 months, your birthday party is cancelled, Do not speak. “ He told her as she was about to complain and argue about it. “I am going to spank you now, then you will stand facing the wall, holding the coin for 1 hour. You drop it, you start again. Then you will go over my knee again. You will be spanked every day, before you start your schoolwork with Mamma and at bedtime, until I feel you have learnt your lesson. So this could be a week, a month or the entire 2 months. I do not care how sore your bottom is going to be, or that you might be going to school with a red, burning, bruised bottom. You will learn never to do this again. Now go into my bedside cabinet and hand me the clear looking paddle.” Rayanna walked over to it, opening the drawer she saw a whole collection of paddles and strange looking things. It was then when she spotted a cane resting against the cabinet, hidden by the bed, plus a black thing that look a bit scary. The clear looking one was on the top of them, it was surprisingly heavy as she picked it up, noticing there were holes in it. Handing it to her Pappa, he pointed to the other side of where he sat, She walked around him and stood by his side, her tummy was in knots and tears were fighting to flow down her face.

Pappa looked at her, “I hope this is the last time I need to punish you like this. I’ve never had to give you a spanking before, I promise you, it will be much worse than your Mamma’s. Now bend over.” 

Daddy’s story, Rayanna the very naughty mouse

Daddy’s story                                

Rayanna the very naughty mouse. Chapter 3.

After the scary time when the giants had grabbed Rayanna, she had been severely punished by Pappa mouse and grounded for a whole month. But Rayanna had been so scared, she knew she was wrong to go out to the grassland but it was so boring staying with her brothers and sisters all the time. The giants had much more fun than they did. She wanted adventures. She wanted to see what life was like past the grassland, Rayanna just wanted to explore.

Being grounded for a month was very long and all Rayanna was allowed to do was hang around with her brothers and sisters. They were all quite a bit older than her, and she heard a lot of naughty words that Mamma and Pappa don’t like them using. Her oldest brothers and sisters said the F bomb in every sentence, because they are the oldest, they get away with it as technically they were big mice now, not littles like Rayanna and her other siblings. But hearing them use those words so regularly for a month, Rayanna had found she had started to use the words too. But she knew she had to be careful never to let her parents hear her say it, only the other day one of her brothers told another brother to F off, Mamma heard him, dragging him into the kitchen by his ear, she squirted liquid soap straight into his mouth. He had to stand in the corner with it in his mouth for 15 minutes, only then was he allowed to spit it out but he wasn’t allowed to rinse his mouth. Rayanna’s sister had muttered s**t when Pappa heard her, she had a wet soapy bar of soap rubbed along her teeth, her tongue, her cheeks, then had an hours corner time sucking on the soap. Pappa took the soap out every 10 minutes to wet it again. By the end of the hour, her sister was crying, heaving, scrubbing her teeth with her brush over and over again. It seemed like a harsh punishment for something she hears a lot from the older members of the family, I mean if Rayanna hears it a lot from them, it’s no surprise she says it as well.

A few weeks later, Rayanna got into trouble at Squeak school, a girl was being mean to her best friend, poking her head, flicking her ears with a ruler, saying her ears were huge and trying to trip her up, grabbing at her tail, so Rayanna shoved her to the floor, calling her a F’ing mean bitch. Mr Theodore, her head of year teacher, happened to be walking behind them all just at the wrong time, so he had seen what had happened and marched them all to Miss Finch’s office, she’s the head teacher. Mr Theodore told her about Suquie being bullied by the other group of mice, but then told her about Rayanna’s attack back and verbal abuse.

Miss Finch does not tolerate bullying or foul language at all. We were all sent to wait outside her office as she phoned all our parents. They had to come in and see her so they could be told exactly what happened, then they were to take us home. Suquie was really upset by what had happened, she had actually done nothing wrong but was more upset Rayanna was in big trouble for protecting her. 

Suquie’s Mamma arrived first, she glanced at the 9 of us before going into Miss Finch’s office. After about 10 minutes, Suquie was called to go in, Rayanna didn’t know what was being said but soon she came out of the office with her Mamma behind her. As they walked past, her Mamma put a loving paw on Rayanna’s shoulder, Rayanna gave a small smile to her and watched as she glowered at the others before hugging her daughter as they left Squeak school. Suquie quickly blew a kiss to her friend, mouthing thank you and love you, Rayanna just smiled and mouthed a love you back. They didn’t need to say anymore. Suquie knew Rayanna was going to be in serious trouble with Miss Finch and her parents, all to protect her, she was a special friend.
One by one, the parents arrived and left a while later, with their mouse looking unhappy and guilty, Rayanna stared at them, looking defiant at each of them as they walked past. She knew she would do exactly the same again to protect her best friend. She’s been picked on all through school just because her ears were extraordinarily large but Rayanna looked after her friends and would never allow anyone to bully them. EVER.

Finally Rayanna saw her mother walk in, she quickly lost her defiant look on her face and looked guilty as she watched her Mamma walk straight past her, into Miss Finch’s office. Twenty minutes later Rayanna was called in. Her tummy was in knots,  as she walked in and stood by her Mamma, who looked furious but still would not look at her daughter. Miss Finch wanted to know exactly what happened then began lecturing her about why attacking and pushing the other girl was not acceptable behaviour. Finally she asked if Rayanna had anything to say, “Yes Miss Finch, I understand pushing her was wrong but that bitch has been bullying Suquie for years,” Her Mamma gasped when she heard her swear, and slapped her bottom really hard, then told her never to use curse words again. Rayanna felt her rage boiling up inside, why was she in trouble for protecting her friend. “Mamma, Miss Finch I am only telling you the truth, Miss Finch you know Suquie has had loads of times when that girl has bullied her, the teachers can’t follow her around making sure they don’t do it again. I am not gonna stand by and just watch it happen, I’m gonna protect her.” Rayanna said, her anger sounding in her voice. “Young lady change your tone right now, I know you think this is the best way to protect your friend, but you should just come and tell a teacher.” Miss Finch told her. “Oh what’s the fucking point in that,” Rayanna shouted at her, “That slag has hit her, pushed her, deliberately making her drop her books, bullied her for 3 years, and all she gets is a telling off. Whereas I protect her, I’m not gonna sit back whilst that bitch hurts her. It’s not fucking gonna happen. I don’t care what you say.”
Rayanna’s Mamma looked in shock at hearing her youngest little girl curse so badly, there was a strict no cursing rule and her Mamma or Pappa did not like it and repercussions were severe. Rayanna didn’t care what she said as Miss Finch began telling her to watch her tongue, but Rayanna was in full melt down, as every swear word under the sun came out of her mouth. Her Mamma just looked shocked.

Miss Finch stood up, slapped her hand down on the desk so hard it stopped Rayanna on the spot, but Rayanna’s nostrils flared, she was breathing hard, suddenly it dawned on her exactly what had just happened. “Get out of my office and face the wall outside by my door Rayanna right now.” Miss Finch shouted at her. She watched as Rayanna stamped outside, slammed the door and stood facing the wall.  

Thirty minutes later Miss Finch opened the door and told her to come in. Her Mamma sat to the side on Miss Finch’s desk now, Rayanna didn’t know why. “Rayanna I will not tolerate such outbursts, the cursing or being shouted at. You may think you did the right thing but this school has a No Bullying Policy, by anyone. What happens to the other girls is not your concern, what you need to be concerned about is what will happen to you. Quite frankly if the governor’s heard this outburst you would be expelled immediately. Now your mother and I have discussed this and we’ve come to an agreement. Rayanna you are suspended for one month. In that time you will be given school work, which your mother will ensure you do. Now I will come to the issue of your language just now. I do not accept such language towards me, this is a very serious issue. Your mother and I have agreed you should be punished separately for this.” Standing up, Miss Finch walked towards the door, going to a cupboard she got out a bowl and turned to Rayanna, “Go and fill this with warm water please Rayanna.” Confused Rayanna just did as she was told. Meanwhile Miss Finch got other things out of her cupboard. Rayanna paid no attention when she came in, giving the bowl to Miss Finch. 

Miss Finch handed Rayanna a bar of soap and told Rayanna to rub the soap in the water until it was nice and soft and soapy. Confused but frankly Rayanna just didn’t give a damn, she just did it moodily. That’s when things became real for her as she saw Miss Finch take out a cane from her cupboard. Rayanna had heard of her caning kids before but never knew if it was true or not. “Stand in front on the desk please Rayanna.” Miss Finch told her. “Do you want to stay ?” She asked her Mamma, who nodded, she was staying there.  Rayanna looked confused until Miss Finch began talking again. “Rayanna, I am very disappointed in your behaviour today, you’re lack of remorse, frankly your outburst and cursing is certainly not acceptable so you’ve had your consequence for fighting, now you will get your consequence for your behaviour in my office. Your mother and I have agreed, I am going to give you a mouth soaping then you will keep your bar of soap in your mouth whilst I cane your bare bottom 20 times ! Do you understand me ?” Miss Finch stood there, putting a disposable glove on her hand. Rayanna was in a state of shock, Did I hear right ? Rayanna thought, Did she just say she would give me a mouth soaping whatever that is, and a caning ? And her mother agreed ? She stared at her Mamma, until she walked over to her daughter and slapped Rayanna’s bottom hard. She gasped in shock, “Answer Miss Finch now Rayanna.” Her Mamma said before sitting down again. “What ? No, I don’t understand.” She spluttered. “Miss Finch make it 25 with the cane, Rayanna is being impertinent. I’ve just about had enough of her behaviour.”
“Very well. Take your panties off please.” Miss Finch told Rayanna. Tears flooded her eyes, she looked beggingly at her mother who just watched coldly as she slowly slipped her pink panties down and lifted them up off the floor, Miss Finch pointed to a chair so Rayanna dropped them on it, moving back in front of the desk. “Open your mouth wide,” Miss Finch ordered as she took out the slimy wet soap out of the bowl. She rubbed the soap along her teeth, top and bottom, front and back, “Tongue out,” as she rubbed the soap all over her tongue. Rayanna began gagging, her eyes watering from the intense smell and burning. Miss Finch wet the soap again, pushed it into Rayanna’s mouth and told her to hold it tightly. “If you drop the soap, I will add a stroke to your hands at the end, now bend over the desk, lift your tail up and over your shoulder. Do not let it drop, or you will gain extra strokes, your hands can reach the edge of the desk Rayanna, so do it. You’ve never received a caning before, I hope you learn from this and never repeat this again.”

Rayanna was crying before the first stroke hit her small bottom, a muffled screech came out of her mouth as Miss Finch performed a perfect ladder affect down her bottom. Rayanna tried hard not to drop the soap, but with all her crying the soap dropped onto the table. “1 extra to your hands after this.” Miss Finch wet the soap, and put it in Rayanna’s mouth again. Drying her hands, Miss Finch picked up the cane, “Into position !” she ordered and quickly Rayanna moved back. She felt the cane tap her sore bottom, making her jump, then the next set of 10 whipped across her backside, catching the under part of her bum, and the top of her thighs, making her shriek, drop the soap and gained another 1 on her paws. Miss Finch continued until she had done 20. “5 left Rayanna, I hope your learning from this. Let’s get this final 5 done.” Again Rayanna gasped and sobbed, the soap was becoming even more difficult to hold in her mouth as she cried harder, the soap fell before the next swipe. Miss Finch was not happy, “1 more to your paws, that’s 3 now, drop it again it will be 5 on your paws, Understand ?” She said sternly, as Rayanna nodded miserably. She bit down hard on the soap, praying it didn’t break in her mouth. 

Miss Finch administered 5 severe stripes from her higher thigh, upwards as Rayanna screamed with her mouth closed tight. Luckily the soap didn’t break or fall out of her mouth again, until Miss Finch went to remove it, handing her a cloth to wipe her face and mouth. Miss Finch allowed her a few moments to clean herself up. Rayanna scrubbed the cloth over her teeth to get the soap out, she couldn’t really feel her bottom, except for this burning and her bottom felt double its normal size, as long as she didn’t move she felt no pain. 

“Rayanna put both your paws up, palms up please. Closer together, you will get 3 strokes on your paws because you dropped your soap. Ready ?” Miss Finch asked kindly, she knew Rayanna must be incredibly sore and she was very impressed with how well she took this punishment. Her Mamma had told her she gets spanked at home but nothing like this, but she had wanted her to learn from it, plus she had her father to deal with when she went home. Secretly Miss finch hoped her father didn’t spank her until she was healed but that was his decision. There were a few broken skin areas across her skin, she would deal with them before she left.  

Rayanna cried her heart out when Miss Finch caned her palms 3 times, when it was over, she blew into her paws, shaking them. Snot and tears mixed together making her look a terrible mess, at first Miss Finch carefully rubbed soothing cream onto her palms, then handed her a fresh cloth to wipe her face again. “Just bend over a moment so I can check you’ve no cuts on your skin.” Rayanna bent back over the desk as Miss Finch put 5 plasters on her bottom and one on her thigh, she then rubbed a little cream on her before telling her to put her panties back on.

It was so painful to walk, nevermind to try to pull her panties up. She carefully tried to lift them up high then slowly down so she didn’t touch herself, but it didn’t help. It hurt like hell.

“Rayanna, I know you think you were protecting Suquie, but can you imagine how she will feel now, when she knows how much trouble you have been in, the punishment you have been given from me, nevermind what punishment you will get at home. I think she will feel incredibly guilty, don’t you ?” Miss Finch asked, Rayanna looked at her and nodded. “Now do you see, maybe you should have just kept coming to me. From now on, if anyone bullies her or anyone else, I want you to come to me. Don’t even tell your form teacher, I will be personally involved in Suquie now, her mother explained just how much she has been going through and quite frankly, a lot of it, I didn’t know. But I do not want you to do anything. What do bullies get out of doing what they do ? “ She asked. “T….to hurt someone, upset someone, get them into trouble instead of the bullies.” Rayanna said. “Exactly, do you think they will be sad to learn of the trouble they are in ?” Miss Finch asked. “N…N..no, they will laugh about it.” Rayanna said. “I’ve given them what they want.” She sniffed thinking about it. “I was just sick of what they’ve been doing to Suquie, Mamma, you know I come home and tell you about it. I tell the teachers and they just speak to them but nothing ever changes. Suquie, she…..she’s been talking about hurting herself. I’ve always talked her out of her depression, but she’s in a bad way Miss Finch. Mamma I promise you, it’s true, I’m not supposed to tell anyone. But I’m scared she might do something, if her Mamma finds out she may move schools, I can’t stay here without her.” “Alright Rayanna, I’m really pleased you’ve told me, I will have to speak with her parents but I think it’s time I look more deeply into exactly what has been going on. Believe me when I say I have no idea it has become this bad. So something has gone seriously wrong with my system in school. Now look, I want you to go home, think about this, I do not want a repeat session. And Rayanna, you ever speak to me in that way again, or use foul language, I will cane you again. Understand ?” Miss Finch asked.

“Yes Miss Finch, I’m really really sorry bout what I said,” Rayanna told her, “I know, and I will do my best to sort this out.” She told Rayanna and her Mamma. “Thank you Miss Finch, I’m terribly sorry for what has happened,” her Mamma told her. “I think her bottom may need attention when she is home.” Miss Finch said. Her Mamma nodded, said thank you, then put an arm around her daughter’s shoulders and left together. 

Chapter 6, Rayanna the very naughty mouse.

Its been a long time since I wrote a chapter of Daddys story, so I hope you can remember it.

Rayanna, the very naughty mouse. Chapter 6.

Whilst Rayanna was chatting away with Suquie, her Mamma was busy cleaning up the kitchen after lunch, getting the afternoons school work ready. The phone rang, picking it up she saw it was her husband. “Hi Sebastian, you ok ?” It was unusual for him to phone whilst in work. “No, I’m not ok. I forgot to take Rayanna’s mobile of her. I don’t want her to be in contact with anyone. I’ve just tried phoning her, and the line is engaged. Do you know about this ?” He did not seem happy about this. “I…..I gave her permission to call Suquie.” Honey told him. “Since when have we allowed our children to use their mobile phones when they are grounded. You should have realised I had just forgotten to take it off her and done it yourself. NOT give her permission to call her friend.” He was furious with his wife. “I know Sebastian, but she just needed to make sure Suquie was ok, they are only chatting hunnie, She’s been a really good girl this morning.” Honey tried to stay cheery, but really she was beginning to feel very nervous. “Oh well, that’s ok then, she’s been good for A morning, after all that’s happened. Really Honey ?” Sebastian told her. “We will talk about this later. You’ve made a grave mistake, one you should never have done. You know mobiles are not allowed if grounded. I’m surprised at you. I will see you later, I think you know what is going to happen.” HE hung up, leaving Honey looking at her phone, her hand shaking slightly.

She realised she had just made a terrible mistake and she was going to pay for it. Once Rayanna finished her lunch, her Mamma asked for her phone. “Why Mamma, Pappa didn’t say take it away.” She whined. “No he forgot, he’s just phoned me to say he tried calling you, he knows you were talking to Suquie and he’s not very happy with me at all.” Rayanna thought she knew what she meant by that statement, so without moaning, she handed her the mobile. Mamma smiled, whispered thank you, then took it away. She felt worried about what her Pappa would do, also, would he be mad at her too. She hoped not.

Rayanna continued her homework, there were a few things with her maths she didn’t understand, so she would have to ask her Pappa for help. Mamma wasn’t very up to date with maths nowadays, as it had changed considerably since she was at school. Honey busily prepared and cooked the evening meal and quickly all the family returned home from whatever they were doing, school, college or work. Sebastian was the last to come home, he’d had a very busy day and felt very tired but he had to deal with his disobedient wife. The family chatted non-stop during dinner, only Rayanna and her parents knew something was wrong, but it was always like this. Eventually Honey had cleaned up, Sebastian went to get some bits done himself, then went to see Rayanna. “Hi Pappa, could you help me do my maths. I was struggling with it.” She got up to get her book and together they worked through the parts she was struggling with, he was very good at explaining how to do the working out, she didn’t want to be told the answer, she wanted to know how to do it. Eventually she had completed it all.

“Now Rayanna, come sit on the bed a moment. I believe Mamma gave you permission to speak with Suquie earlier ?” He asked, “ Now you know the rules if you’ve been grounded don’t you ?” He asked, the sound of his voice chilled Rayanna a little. “Y…Yes Pappa, I only wanted to……..” Rayanna began, until her Pappa put a finger up. “Do you know the rules Rayanna ?” He asked, she looked at the floor, “Yes Pappa,” She whispered. “Then why did you ask for your phone ? Your Mamma should have known better than to give it to you, but you should also have known better than to ask. Should you not ?” He asked patiently. “I..I..just wanted to check on Suquie Pappa. I…….” Rayanna tried to explain. “I don’t want excuses, I want you to learn to follow my rules. Over and over you disobey me, well no more. You’ve been a spoilt little brat and I’m not putting up with it anymore. Now you need you’re bedtime spanking before I deal with your mother and I can tell you, I’m not happy with either of you.”  “PaPappa, please.” Rayanna began. “No more Rayanna.” Her Pappa stood up, began unfastening his belt, pulling it quickly through the loops of his trousers, dropping it on her cot, he sat back down and in one quick movement, he grabbed Rayanna’s wrist and threw her over his knee. Her school skirt flew over her bottom before she had a chance to breath then her Pappa began spanking. All the while lecturing her about following his rules at all times, and he was fed up with both her and her Mamma thinking they don’t apply to them. It was going to change from now. Rayanna refused to cry, she was mad at him, she didn’t see any issue with wanting to check up on her friend. Well she was NOT going to cry.

Her Pappa stopped then, reaching for something, she spotted what is was. It was her wooden long school ruler. As he began swinging heavy swats across her sit spots, Rayanna became more and more angry, punching her Pappa’s legs, kicking backwards to try to catch his arms, He ended up putting one leg over her so she couldn’t kick then grabbed both arms and held them behind her back. “And this behaviour is also not accessible, and will only land you in more trouble,” her Pappa said, swatting the back of her legs, now Rayanna fought the tears away, I will not cry, I will not cry, She told herself, over and over, refusing to get up even though her bottom and legs were now burning madly. “Get up and get over the bed, don’t you dare move,” Pappa told her. She lay over the bed, hugging her pillow tightly under her head. 

Pappa grabbed his belt, raised at and whipped it across her backside, her sit spot and legs until eventually Rayanna couldn’t hold back anymore and she sobbed into the pillow. It didn’t long to break, Pappa knew she reached her limit, he hated punishing his little girl but enough was enough and she had to learn this.

Stopping, he dropped the belt on the desk, lifted her up, scooped her onto his knees as he sat on the bed, she immediately began hugging him and he did her. Rocking her gently, side by side, hissing her head. “Right lie down, let me rub some cream on, then you can go to bed,” Rayanna climbed off her Pappa’s knee, she was so sore and tender it hurt so much to walk and move, tears began to fall down her face again. Pappa picked up the cream, “Now, what are you going to do with this cream ?” He asked as he gently rubbed it on her bottom, and legs. “Erm, I’m gonna rub cream in morning and night, and maybe during the day, if I need too.” She stuttered. “That’s right, because if you don’t ?” He asked once more, “You will spank me Pappa.” “Good girl, you know I will, I expect you to be obedient, I won’t tolerate this behaviour from any of you, my children or my wife. Now all done, go wash your face and then you can have an early night.” Pappa told her. “But it’s only 7pm Pa……..” She began. “Do I have to give you a reminder of what happens when you don’t do you you’re told ?” He sternly asked, his eyes turned steely grey and his face un-relenting. “Yes Pappa.” She muttered as she walked to her bathroom  to have a wash, then she went to bed crying into her pillow until she fell asleep.

Pappa put his belt back on and went to the living room, he was exhausted. He helped himself to a drink a took a long sip, thinking about Honey, who he knew would be in a panic, worrying about what her fate would be. No doubt she will have heard Rayanna cry, and he would be sure that Honey would be more than crying by the time he’d finished with her. Recently her disobedience had become inexcusable, He intended on making sure this will not happen again and Honey had no idea what was in-store for her. He had booked a long weekend away, Thursday until Sunday, the older children will be in charge of the youngsters and he knew, they would follow the rules, 100%. Honey will think it’s going to be a lovely treat away from home but she will be in for a shock. There was a very special place, almost like his second home, Acorn Snuggery where his disobedient wife will be going. It’s a very old exclusive, private club only for men who have the highest respect from public clubs are allowed to join. There anything goes. It is designed for Masters to bring their subs back in order, Specially trained Dominants / Dominatrix’s who are called The Matriarchs work here, using all and any forms of punishment, torture and humiliation. Subs are brought there and left, to be dealt with by these Matriarchs. So they know their misdemeanour must have been extremely serious for them to be sent here. Next door is another private retreat, only for the Masters. Here, in their private quarters, they can continue as normal. They could do work here, or just use the chance to catch up with fellow Masters. Surveillance cameras were everywhere in the Snuggery, and in the retreat the Masters can watch anything that happens, to their own sub and to others. They could even talk to the Matriarch’s via their earpiece. It is recorded and put on a memory stick for each Master, when they leave. It’s an incredibly expensive club to join, but even if you were a millionaire, if Masters from other clubs did not pay them huge respect and get voted into the club, you will not get in. 

It will be extreme, the worst any sub can experience, but, all subs know if they are sent there then there will be unbearable punishments and torture, yet they would have to dig deep inside tthemselves to take it. Only once a Master is sure the sub has learnt their lesson, the retraining will stop. But if the Matriarchs disagree then the sub will stay longer. Sebastian had only sent Honey there once, after being married 5 years, and she only lasted 24 hours. This time she would be there 60+ hours, and he had no intention of ending it early.

She will learn, but she will learn the hard way.

A new task for Daddy from Master is to write a blog every month. Here’s his first one and I think he’s done a great job. Enjoy the read.

This life and time of Manho the Daddy

So, where do I begin, I would say right from the start would be as good of any place as any July 2017, but before we start here’s a little about me. I am nearly at my 42nd birthday, I am now a Daddy to my beautiful girl Little Minxs and a sub to Master, I am nothing to look at, 5’5”, slightly curvy (a lot), and a rather wicked sense of humour, and this little tale is how I became a Daddy Dom and submissive and the journey I have taken to get here so sit back, hold on tight and enjoy the ride.

As I said it came about in July 2017, the exact date I cannot remember, myself, my beautiful wife and our son was at a close friends house party and my wife had told me that she had full intentions of getting drunk “So don’t expect to go home early,” she says to me just before I went off to work that morning.

So, after a hard days graft (honest) we were at our friends house having beers and chilling, enjoying ourselves, I became rather tired and just wanted to sleep however Piggy, my wife, oh yes Piggy is the name given to her by Master G, or as she refers to him as Sir G, any way I digress, so being tired I just wanted to go home and sleep, however the lovely wife, Piggy had other ideas, just letting loose and getting drunk, now she had already polished off a bottle of wine and what ever else to be had consumed earlier that evening and was well on her way on the second bottle. Now Master and my Little Minxs will very well understand what happens next after Piggy has had a couple of bottles of wine, all I can say is Dr Jekell and Ms Hyde…….so I think it may off been about 11’ish we shall say and I asked Piggy if we were going home, this was a very stupid thing to ask really as she had already gave me the heads up she was planning on staying out and enjoying herself, so with the question asked she said “I told you this morning that we were staying out and I was planning on getting drunk,” so with that I skulked away, I do get rather narky when I’m tired so this didn’t help matters much.

I went into the front room of our friend’s house and sulked, after a bit I went back to join the rest and Piggy must of known I wasn’t happy which is when things in both our lives turned…and I must admit now for the most defiant better. I could see she was getting upset and I tried to stupidly talk to her but she just kept telling me to go away as I was making things worse, now I have seen her upset before and we have both been through a lot but to be honest I have never seen her this upset and I was crapping myself a lot as I didn’t know what to say or do to make amends at that point, and yes I should of left her alone but the pig headedness in me kept mythering her and winding her up even more to the point she just came out with the one sentence I would never forget, “I need more”.

Now at first as a man I just looked at her with a gormless expression on my face, and the response I could only give her was “eh”, “I need more, different cock”, now that hit me like a sack of shit, as believe me when I say my self esteem and confidence took a big blow was a understatement. She carried on explaining what she meant and we talked, and one thing in all of this is I didn’t want to loose her, this extraordinary, magically, wonderful woman who has been in my life for at least 13 years, so I told her I would be willing to try and do anything within reason. That evening or should I say early hours Sunday morning we went home and had nookies.

The next day we sat discussing this further, she reassured me that I wasn’t doing anything wrong but she had desires and needs and found it hard to approach me about them, I must admit I do have a very open mind and now has been opened even more after our experiences in the swinging seen and now in our polyamorous/ \Dom dynamic with both Master/Sir G and my Little Minxs/Masters Serf…with this being said this story will unfold next month when I write about our first meets, till then take it easy…..

Manho/Daddy..

I dreamed a spanking, just like I longed for. I hope comes true soon, just like I longed.

It had been a while since I got spanked, my back has been so painful for weeks, everytime I thought it was getting better, it was only getting worse or stayed the same.

Seeing Daddy had been very difficult as we both felt the desire to spank and play but it had been banned by Master until I was better.

Two weeks later, Daddy had his day off, he sent me an order.

‘Have the camera on its stand facing the bed, put Netflix on the TV and we shall continue watching Sons of Anarchy. Get the episode ready, series 1, episode 3 in case you had forgotten. When I arrive I want you naked, sat up on your knees, feet crossed, facing the wall, hands on your head. You will remain there until I tell you. Understand Little Minxs ?’ It said. ‘Yes Daddy’ I replied, a little shocked at how strict he sounded. Maybe we are gonna snuggle on the bed watching TV, well I guess that would be nice but I’d much rather have some fun.

As soon as I spotted his car arrive, I got into position. As usual I heard the commotion coming from the dogs, both wanting all Daddy’s attention, as he locked the front door. He never spoke to to me, I could feel myself begin to sulk as he went and got a coffee then sat on the settee as the dogs craved his love.

Once he drunk his coffee, he went upstairs. I heard him rummage about upstairs. I had no idea what he was doing. I hadn’t asked permission to play from Master and as far as I knew neither had Daddy. So he can’t be preparing to play, can he ?

After at least 40 minutes of being on my knees, they were really hurting, I heard him call down, “Make a brew and bring them up please.” I carefully stood up, getting my balance before making the coffee and carried them carefully upstairs. He lay on the bed, naked, as he patted the bed next to him. There were no signs of anything out of the drawers, but I was giddy with finally getting his attention. So I scrambled next to him, getting into my favourite position for snuggling, until the coffee was cool enough to drink. Both dogs were settled at the end of the bed now fast asleep

“Pass me the cushions off the floor please, then check the video, I want it close up to us. Once it’s in the correct position put the video on record then climb next to me.” He told me as I passed him the cushions which he put by his opposite side. After sorting the camera I climbed next to him, ready to snuggle instead he said “No, lie over my lap, use the cushions to make yourself comfy.” I felt a twinge in my pussy, were we gonna be playing, I wondered. But what about Master ? He could be watching. I thought, worried but desperate for his touch.

We continued to watch Sons of Anarchy for a few minutes, “Are you comfy Little Minxs, how’s your back ? Tell me the truth.” “It’s fine so far Daddy.” I said. “Good girl, as soon as it begins to hurt you tell me, promise me.” “I promise Daddy.” Quickly rolling my eyes, but he couldn’t see me so it didn’t matter. But I knew he was only looking out for me, so I felt a little guilty doing it.

We lay like this for some time, Daddy gently stroked my hair,  tickled my back or my legs before I felt his hand on my bottom, stroking, squeezing, teasing my hole. I giggled, “Daddy I haven’t asked permission. We can’t play.” “Let me worry about that,” he told me. This wasn’t like him, he hated punishments, I mean really hated them, not like me or PiggyJ, so why would he do something he knew would get us both punished. But me being me just started to relax into it.

We chatted about the TV show, I love Sons of Anarchy, I was comfy, enjoying Daddy’s touch, plus watching Sons.

Suddenly Daddy lifted his hand and walloped me so hard, I jumped, “OW,” I tried to move but he had his hand firmly on my back. “Did that hurt…….” “Of course it hurt Daddy.” Another wallop. “OW !” “Did that hurt your back ? I was going to ask, had you not interrupted me.” “Oh, erm no I don’t think so, it was all a bit of a shock, all I was thinking about was me bum.”

Daddy chuckled, “Relax, babygirl. Carry on watching Sons.” Daddy waited until he felt me relax fully. “Now I am gonna spank you, the minute you tense up your back I will stop. The minute you tell me your back, not arse, is hurting, I stop. Understand ?” “Yes Daddy,” I said quietly.

Daddy then alternated between stroking, tickling to spanking me. His slaps were not gentle, this had been what I wanted for weeks now. I dreamt of a hand spanking for so long. He kept his other hand on my lower back so he could feel me tense up. Smiling, Daddy was enjoying himself feeling my skin become hotter and hotter, its colour once white, now a brilliant crimson. But he had no intention of stopping yet.

I was thoroughly enjoying myself, sinking into the cushions, I closed my eyes unable to concentrate on the program, so I listened to it instead, every now and then he stopped, “I feel okay Daddy, promise,” I said. “Good girl,” Daddy whispered.

Something cold, lube I presumed dribbled down my crack, a finger slipped it deeper towards my hole. Slowly he pushed his finger inside, just a little, waiting to feel if I tense up, then pushed further. I pushed back when suddenly he pulled out. “If you are going to do that, we are not playing, you do not move, no thrusts, no pushing back nothing, or game over.” He waited until I sulkily said “Yes Daddy.” Then he started again, this time pushing 2 fingers inside, roughly this time, his fingers flicked about inside me. It was Sooo hard not to grind into his fingers but I stayed put, in fact I was quite proud of staying still.

Soon his fingers slipped out and the spanking continued. Sit spot and legs were his choice of area this time. I couldn’t stop myself gasping, crying out, even though I was enjoying it, my bottom was beginning to feel really really sore. But we watched 3 episodes of Sons whilst Daddy played with my bottom.

I heard him pull out a drawer then get comfy again as it was a bit of a reach for him. “Now babygirl, you have a punishment waiting for you. 100 with the cane I believe it was.” “But Daddy I……..” “No buts, stay where you are, DO NOT TENSE UP.”

I didn’t know Daddy had got a smaller bamboo cane out of the drawer. About a month ago I was cutting some of our bamboo down, saving some branches as I thought they would make good canes. Last week he tried one of them, they had dried out and it was incredibly painful as he caned my hands then ass only a few times. When I was on the phone he then chose to continue caning my ass, I inwardly screeched out as I talked to my doctor. He thought it was hilarious.

He’s decided the cane is one of his favourite toys.

I felt the tap of the hard cane on my sore sit spot, one hand rested on my lower back as he started continuous taps of the cane. I quite like it continuous, the pain gradually grows stronger as it licks the same spot over and over. “That’s 25.” he told me. Moving the cane to the middle of my ass, he repeated the process a lot harder. I wriggled slightly with this one, my ouches were loud, some more screams. When he moved to my legs I began to protest, only to be awarded with hard whips until I only cried out but didn’t complain. My legs began kicking out, I felt welts swell, the skin burned, I knew there were thick red stripes across them. But as I kicked out, the cane hit back harder, but it hurt so much, I couldn’t stop myself fighting it. Crying and begging for Daddy to stop, suddenly he did.

“Raise your feet little girl, together and flat. Now.” He told me I did as I was told for once, I knew what he was going to do. “Relax please, I do not want you to strain your back.”

Was he joking ? I mean, I had a lovely hand spanking followed by a horrible 25 with the cane on my sit spot, then buttocks, then legs and he thinks I’m going to be relaxed when I know he’s gonna cane my feet.

But I did it, waiting for that first strike, he tapped my back, knowing I was tense, breathing deeply I tried to relax and slowly I did. “Good girl.” then whack, one strike and I jumped up.

Sweating, crying, I woke up and realised it was all a dream. Yet my body ached as if I had just had a wonderful, painful spanking. Yes I was asleep next to Daddy, but I’d had no spanking, it was still banned, this was all a dream.

Please write a review,

I’d be very very grateful to those who bought my book, to write a review on Amazon, this will encourage others t buy it.
I want to say a thank you for those who have bought it, I’m half way through the sequel.I think you will enjoy this next one too.

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My novel is available in America now.

Master checked Amazon last night, it looks like my book is now available for purchase in America, someone is reading it somewhere across the pond.

If you have been kind enough to purchase my novel, could I please ask if you could take a few minutes to go on Amazon and write a review please. That would be fantastic.

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